I appreciate the feedback, Melanie. In the book itself, which is about 95 percent finished at this point, I have already been doing that: going back through and, in some places, dividing/revising long, winding sentences into shorter ones to vary the effect. I'm sure you're right that the same attention to the proposal will improve it on the way to the final version.
Best of luck on the two you're presently creating!
I appreciate the feedback, Melanie. In the book itself, which is about 95 percent finished at this point, I have already been doing that: going back through and, in some places, dividing/revising long, winding sentences into shorter ones to vary the effect. I'm sure you're right that the same attention to the proposal will improve it on the way to the final version.
Best of luck on the two you're presently creating!
Strong like! Looking forward to hearing more on how you’re gonna approach this
Thank you, Dan! I'm glad the description appeals. More updates, and also excerpts, are imminently forthcoming.